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Sonaze - Sonic's gets sick by KukiTheHyena Sonaze - Sonic's gets sick by KukiTheHyena
Criticism is welcome here ^^ Tell me how I can inprove please. Oh, MS Paint and a graphics tablet is all I have to work with.

If there's spelling mistakes, please tell me. Thank you ^^

Story: (WARNING: QUITE LONG)

Sonic and Blaze were on a date, they had alot of plans for their date but for some reason Sonic didn't feel up to it. He seemed to have no energy, he was breathing a little hard, he looked a little pale and his eyes had a pinkish tone to them. Sonic was convinced that he was fine, but Blaze knew that there's something wrong. "Are you feeling alright, Sonic? You don't seem like yourself" Blaze asked. "I kinda had a rough night last night, I guess I'm a little tired today." Sonic replied. Blaze felt like she could trust Sonic, they continued their date but Blaze was still curious about Sonic.

Sonic rubbed his head, he started to get a terrible headache. "I think we should go home.." Blaze said. "No, its fine. We don't have to." Sonic said to Blaze but he throat was hurting really bad and he had a hoarse voice. "Sonic, I feel you're not well enough to go out today. Please?" Blaze said. Sonic decided to go home, just for Blaze. We they got home, Sonic, reluctantly, layed down in bed and Blaze got Sonic something to eat and drink. "Here, maybe you just need some food. You haven't eaten today." Blaze said while she put the tray, with the food and a glass of water, on his lap.

Even though Sonic wasn't hungry, he forced himself to eat and drank the water, thinking that would make he feel better. He didn't feel any better, in fact he felt worse after doing that. Sonic and Blaze sat on the bed together and watched films for the entire day, even though Sonic didn't like being stuck in a room on a beautiful day. As the evening came, Sonic was developing a high fever. Blaze was, in the kitchen, making Sonic some soup for supper. But the hedgehog upstairs was all huddled up, shivering and the food he forced himself to eat was repeating on him.

Sonic couldn't move very well because of his terrible muscle pains, so he quickly grabbed the bin and threw up into it. Blaze heard a strange sound, she decided to check while the soup was simmering. She walked upstairs, opened the door and Sonic looked at Blaze like a small child who just threw up, the look that's close to crying. "Oh dear, are you alright Sonic?" Blaze asked, she sat next to him and rubbed his back so his muscles would relax. "Lesson learned.. Forcing myself to eat is a stupid move.." Sonic said, his voice sounded even worse.

Blaze laughed slightly, she got up and picked up the bin to go and empty it. "Good thing the bin had a bag in it.. Hehe.." Sonic said with a chuckle. "Yeah." Blaze laughed and walked out to empty the bin and continue cooking the soup. Sonic layed back down, he felt a little better after that. Blaze came back upstairs, with a tray, with the soup for him, Sonic smiled because it was something light. Blaze put the tray of his lap, Sonic picked up the spoon and started eating. Blaze sat next to him on the bed.

Sonic finished the soup, not feeling quite as sick as he did when he ate lunch. Blaze took the tray and went downstairs, Sonic layed down and before he noticed, he was out cold. Blaze came back upstairs and saw Sonic asleep. She smiled, she went back downstairs, and sat on the couch to watch TV. In the middle of the night, Sonic woke up and forced himself out of bed. He was really dizzy, he had to use the wall to keep him standing. He got halfway to the bathroom and just collapsed from his fever. Blaze heard the thud and went upstairs to see if Sonic was alright.

She saw Sonic out cold in the hallway and screamed in shock at seeing him out cold on the floor. She ran over and felt his forehead, he was burning up. She picked him up and put him back to bed. Blaze got the thermometer and took his temperature, Tympanically (In the ear). He had a fever of 103.7, Blaze then cleaned the thermometer off. Blaze decided to not sit on the bed, incase she woke Sonic up, but pulled a chair to the side of the bed and watched him sleep, she stayed up that whole night.

That morning, when Sonic woke up, Blaze was holding a glass of water and some paracetamol/advil. Sonic took the pills and the glass of water. "Thanks.." Sonic said, he put the pills in his mouth and swallowed them with some water. Blaze smiled, and held his hand. "Thanks Blaze.. Thanks for helping me.." Sonic said with the very little voice he had. "No need to thank me, I'd do anything for you." Blaze said. "But you gave me such a scare last night." "Sorry.." "It's okay Sonic, I'm just glad you're okay now."

Sonic held Blaze's hand close to his heart and fell asleep. Blaze smiled at feeling Sonic's steady, and slightly fast, heartbeat and ended up falling asleep in the chair. A week later, Sonic was up on his feet and running through fields with Blaze.

Sonic the Hedgehog and Blaze the Cat SEGA and Sonic Team
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:iconnova2711:
Nova2711 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Brilliant, better than me. :)
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Sonikku-za-Hejjihogg Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love it!! you sir are a genius! XD haah 
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Hewdraw Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
Sweet
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codelyoko674 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
awww super sweet story <3
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atomic-cherrywolf Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Professional Writer
aww this is so sweet
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shadicthehedgehog12 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Awesome story
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Nanafanforever Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student Writer
please see my story of sonaze in my channel :)
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cranny99 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Student
wat happend after he fell going to the bathroom did he forget or go on the floor or bed?
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:iconnanafanforever:
Nanafanforever Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Student Writer
awww! i love sonaze
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Leopardpaw99 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome, I love Sonaze. =D
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sonikkufangirl Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
I'm not a fan of SonAze but it was a great story.
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Sonicguru Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
love it
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Fatyfaty2x4 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
XD when sonic had that throw up of a kid face
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BlackCeiling Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010
Sonic must be suffering from a severe case of Canon-sue.
Blaze knows how to cope with it because she was born with it.
Excellent story btw.
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migueruchan Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its so cute :D
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:iconkukithehyena:
KukiTheHyena Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
Thanks =D
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:iconmigueruchan:
migueruchan Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome :)
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Muffy186 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
aw thats a very sweet story :love: and the picture is lovely
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:iconkukithehyena:
KukiTheHyena Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
Thanks ^^
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:iconleopardhawk:
leopardhawk Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
aw i love sonaze and support them! its cute x
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:iconkukithehyena:
KukiTheHyena Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
Thanks =)
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leopardhawk Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
Its k! i love too see so meny sonaze supporters!!!
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:iconmjponso:
mjponso Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
I personally don't support this couple, but I can easily see the couple of my choice in place of this scene. It's nice to see Blaze cares so much about Sonic. =)
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:iconkukithehyena:
KukiTheHyena Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
I'm glad you can picture your favourite couple in this scene, not many people do that =) They just fly off the handle and shove their opinion down your throat half the time ._.'
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mjponso Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
I have my favorite couples like every other Sonic fan, but I also realize the importance of respecting other people's (differing) opinions. :nod:
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:iconkukithehyena:
KukiTheHyena Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
That's great =D Now why can't others do that? :confused:
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:iconmjponso:
mjponso Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
Because people are selfish and short-sighted and refuse to believe that their opinion is the truth and no one else's is. :roll:
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Sonaze-fangirl Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
AWW! That's cute. I might make a story about something like this, if ya don't mind :D
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:iconkukithehyena:
KukiTheHyena Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
Sure, feel free =D
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Sonaze-fangirl Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
okay :icongreatjobplz:
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:iconkukithehyena:
KukiTheHyena Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
:meow:
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